Tuesday, December 6, 2011

The Call Before the Call

by Tom Adair, author and forensic scientist
Have you ever lost your temper? Done something in that state of mind you regret? I'll bet even money you have. Now imagine that episode is caught on tape and played out on the nightly news. We've all seen those dashcam videos of police officers acting poorly, sometimes criminally. Some videos can be very disturbing and we're all left wondering "what the hell is wrong with that guy?"

There are two very broad possibilities. One, the guy is a bad cop who should look for other employment. The other is that he or she is human and may just be losing their temper. Contrary to what most people think, police officers are human and there is NO training regiment sufficient to turn a police officer into a robot. Now, training can help subdue and re-direct our instincts but emotions are primal and in stressful situations primal instinct always wins out over training.

After 15 years in law enforcement I can tell you that in my experience there is always way more to the story than what you see in the video. When I watch these episodes unfold the first question I usually ask is "what was the call he just left?" Behavior doesn't develop in a vacuum; it is shaped by a myriad of experiences. Police officers have to deal with a lot of issues that shape their behavior over the short, and long-term.

Now, I am in no way excusing bad behavior, let alone criminal acts. What I am saying is that certain behavior should be viewed in context of a broader range of experiences. As writers, this recognition can give your characters much more depth and dimension.

For example, imagine you're a police officer who gets a call to meet mall security to take a 14 year-old girl into custody for shoplifting. Not exactly an exciting call. Most officers would much rather be chasing down real bad guys but you have a job to do. Then imagine the little smart-ass spitting in your face and kicking you in the nuts. You're going to be upset but you can't react the way you might with an adult male gang member or homicide suspect. But, don't you think that experience will change your mood for the day?

Imagine taking a drunk into detox when he pukes all over the backseat of your patrol car. There's no maid service; you probably have to clean that up yourself. What if your kid gets arrested for burglary? Now stack of three or four of these events in a day or two and imagine how you might react to an otherwise minor confrontation with a citizen? I'm not suggesting we throw a pity party for police. They know what they're getting into and they choose to do that work.

As authors, we have an opportunity to use events like these to give depth and definition to our characters. Is your detective going through a messy divorce? How will the stress of infidelity or gambling addiction (financial instability) affect their concentration at a murder scene? Can clues get missed or will they say something improper to the victim's family?

The point I'm making is that peoples lives and careers are often intertwined and never one-dimensional. Consider giving your characters obstacles in their personal lives that may shape their professional ones. I think you'll get a lot of satisfaction from the depth it can add to your character and your readers will hopefully connect with them as humans.

8 comments:

  1. Or, as those in the romance genre might say, "Stick your heroine up a tree and shoot at her."

    It's all about conflict, and the 'job vs real life' scenario offers so many opportunities. Plus we get to know the characters when we see them off the job.

    Terry
    Terry's Place
    Romance with a Twist--of Mystery

    ReplyDelete
  2. "Stick your heroine up a tree and shoot at her"??? You Romance folks are HARSH! Thanks for visiting Terry!! How is Deadly Secrets being received?

    ReplyDelete
  3. Wow. Romance is a lot rougher than I thought!

    Because I'm not in LE, the thing that helps me connect with a character is their personal lives.

    Thanks for the creativity boost, Tom.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Excellent post, Tom! Yes, cops are human, just like everyone else, and who knows what they may be going through in their personal lives or earlier that day?

    But they're also in a position of responsibility and in the public eye. I think it's important to screen potential police officers with personality and character tests, etc. (they probably do) and also offer ongoing free counseling and ways to help them work off steam. Maybe not so feasible financially...

    ReplyDelete
  5. Very thoughtful post. In fiction, as in real life, it's a fine line between making a human mistake that people will relate to or forgive...and stepping over into rogue territory. But as always, it's important to remember that everyone could have a painful/stressful private life that we know nothing about.

    ReplyDelete
  6. An interesting and somewhat related email that came my way this afternoon involving the events that led up to the students being pepper sprayed at UC-Davis.

    http://www.youtube.com/embed/hhPdH3wE0_Y

    ReplyDelete
  7. You bring up some good points, Tom. For those of us who write about crime, it's important to try and put ourselves in the shoes of those who fight crime. On a similar note, too often, I read books where law enforcement officials are portrayed as having stereotypical behaviors or attitudes. We've all seen it, the cop who seems cold and unaffected by the crime he's investigating or on the flip-side, the one whose temper always seems to be on the brink of boiling over. Sure, these behaviors exist among law enforcement personnel, but they exist in ALL people, civilian or otherwise. It's when we push them to the point of being caricatures of themselves that we do them a disservice.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Tom - Deadly Secrets is out there. Reception is positive; just wish there was more of it!

    Terry
    Terry's Place
    Romance with a Twist--of Mystery

    ReplyDelete

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.